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This furry visual novel is very well done, everything looks great, even the music right now is the one I like the most. The bad thing is that it ends very quickly, but I hope that all of us who are here waiting for an update get it

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Que puedo decir AGRADEZCO MUCHÍSIMO que tenga traducción al español ya que otras novelas que tengo pues... simplemente no traen traducción a otro idioma jaja dejando eso a un lado quiero escribir muchísimo sobre lo que me encantó de esto pero me da flojera jaja muy bien el desarrollo,tiene momentos comicos que si que sacan una sonrisa y quemas puedo decir,es perfecto lo único que no me gustó es que llegue al final antes de lo esperad :( pero bueno espero que actualicen pronto el juego y les deseó suerte a los desarrolladores de esto <3

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My last read of this was in 9th grade, I'm about to graduate high school before I see the ending. Hopefully update comes out before we know who the roaring knight is 

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update? ..... ;-;

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This vn is very good for me, so I hope I can see the ending of this work before I die(′Д`)

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The facial expressions are so fun! Especially Lucy and Beru's

Вот за то что есть Русский язык это лайк однозначно, а то я уже устал вручную переводить текст в novel

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yall theres other games for yall to play ...stop rushing the creator

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This game is amazing, I'm waiting for the next update

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lets hope next update comes before GTA6

I liked it, can't wait to read more :)

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yall need to stop catastrophizing in the comments, the last dev log literally said it's gonna be a while before the next update because theyre writing the whole rest of it before updating further

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the novel was canceled?

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Wait, really?

No, no, I wonder if maybe they canceled this novel since there are no updates and the developers are also not posting an image or anything related to the novel.

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You go on. Do you think the update will come out or the game will be canceled?

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From what I see, they're still working on the novel, as they sent a message and a pixel-style sprite image of Beru and Owen, which reads as follows:


This part is taking a while, but it will be finished soon.


RPG VERSION OF BERU (No sprites. The RPG has its own sprites.)


THERE IS A NORMAL BACKGROUND AND AN RPG VERSION.


THE ENTIRE SCENE WILL BE MADE UP OF 3 BACKGROUNDS WITH THE SAME, AND A PIXELATED RPG OF THE SAME BACKGROUND.


So there's still hope for a new update to the novel ^^

Thanks my friend. you wanna talk in discord? 

I'm really getting worried since there's no sign of the developers on Twitter or Discord.

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Even here on this page there is no response from them.

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To be honest, I'm already losing hope that an update will update.

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World War 3 might as well happen before this game updates

its been two years is this still being produced?

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They're still working on the other chapters and routes. They posted an image of Owen and Lucy on Twitter this year, so they're probably still working on the chapters.

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i heard they plan on releasing the chapters in bulk

last time i checked ch3-4 is already finished while the rest of the chapters are still being worked on

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Overall, it's okay, not the best nor the worst 


My thoughts on the writing 🧠 ✏️:

Don't get me wrong but I do love myself a good stranded on an island and team work story, but the story seems a bit fast paced, lacks details on some areas and is a little cliché, meaning I'm not exactly getting attached to any of the characters in an emotional way, but it's good enough as is to get people to continue reading and wanting to know more but needs more emotional development and description for dramatic and immersion effect. The anime like humour is amazing, it's nice to see little chibi moments and references, does give me a smile at how cute it can be sometimes (I'm still waiting for that gay romance)


Characters and BG 🫂:

The character designs are very cute and I love the art style, it really adds to who these characters are (my favourite is Beru, he's a chubby teddy bear 🧸), the facial expressions are on point and little moments like by the fire together is really nice, really sets the mood very well. The BG is nicely made in addition, it's beautiful and adds to the aesthetics this story has made.


Music 🎵:

The music is calming and sits well with the aesthetics that you guys have place in and particularly for certain unserious moments as well which is a plus, would like more variety in terms of influencing emotion and nuance but well done.


Overall 🤷‍♀️:

It's appealling visually and aurally, well done art and BGs, music fits with majority of the scenes, writing will need more in depth description to give finesse, nuance, emotional attachment and generally keeping the viewers attention on the story without making it seem off the initial emotion in the scene but the writing currently is enough to keep the viewers attention for wanting more info. Humour in the writing is definitely a plus, making reading this enjoyable at times.


Will be giving this VN a chance over the coming updates (31/05/25)

A very nice and in deoth analysis I can agree with

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Manifesting an update... 

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let me manifest with you

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Actualizen porfavor ;-;

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