They're still working on the other chapters and routes. They posted an image of Owen and Lucy on Twitter this year, so they're probably still working on the chapters.
Don't get me wrong but I do love myself a good stranded on an island and team work story, but the story seems a bit fast paced, lacks details on some areas and is a little cliché, meaning I'm not exactly getting attached to any of the characters in an emotional way, but it's good enough as is to get people to continue reading and wanting to know more but needs more emotional development and description for dramatic and immersion effect. The anime like humour is amazing, it's nice to see little chibi moments and references, does give me a smile at how cute it can be sometimes (I'm still waiting for that gay romance)
Characters and BG 🫂:
The character designs are very cute and I love the art style, it really adds to who these characters are (my favourite is Beru, he's a chubby teddy bear 🧸), the facial expressions are on point and little moments like by the fire together is really nice, really sets the mood very well. The BG is nicely made in addition, it's beautiful and adds to the aesthetics this story has made.
Music 🎵:
The music is calming and sits well with the aesthetics that you guys have place in and particularly for certain unserious moments as well which is a plus, would like more variety in terms of influencing emotion and nuance but well done.
Overall 🤷♀️:
It's appealling visually and aurally, well done art and BGs, music fits with majority of the scenes, writing will needmore in depth description to give finesse, nuance, emotional attachment and generally keeping the viewers attention on the story without making it seem off the initial emotion in the scene but the writing currently is enough to keep the viewers attention for wanting more info. Humour in the writing is definitely a plus, making reading this enjoyable at times.
Will be giving this VN a chance over the coming updates (31/05/25)
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World War 3 might as well happen before this game updates
its been two years is this still being produced?
They're still working on the other chapters and routes. They posted an image of Owen and Lucy on Twitter this year, so they're probably still working on the chapters.
i heard they plan on releasing the chapters in bulk
last time i checked ch3-4 is already finished while the rest of the chapters are still being worked on
Overall, it's okay, not the best nor the worst
My thoughts on the writing 🧠 ✏️:
Don't get me wrong but I do love myself a good stranded on an island and team work story, but the story seems a bit fast paced, lacks details on some areas and is a little cliché, meaning I'm not exactly getting attached to any of the characters in an emotional way, but it's good enough as is to get people to continue reading and wanting to know more but needs more emotional development and description for dramatic and immersion effect. The anime like humour is amazing, it's nice to see little chibi moments and references, does give me a smile at how cute it can be sometimes (I'm still waiting for that gay romance)
Characters and BG 🫂:
The character designs are very cute and I love the art style, it really adds to who these characters are (my favourite is Beru, he's a chubby teddy bear 🧸), the facial expressions are on point and little moments like by the fire together is really nice, really sets the mood very well. The BG is nicely made in addition, it's beautiful and adds to the aesthetics this story has made.
Music 🎵:
The music is calming and sits well with the aesthetics that you guys have place in and particularly for certain unserious moments as well which is a plus, would like more variety in terms of influencing emotion and nuance but well done.
Overall 🤷♀️:
It's appealling visually and aurally, well done art and BGs, music fits with majority of the scenes, writing will need more in depth description to give finesse, nuance, emotional attachment and generally keeping the viewers attention on the story without making it seem off the initial emotion in the scene but the writing currently is enough to keep the viewers attention for wanting more info. Humour in the writing is definitely a plus, making reading this enjoyable at times.
Will be giving this VN a chance over the coming updates (31/05/25)
A very nice and in deoth analysis I can agree with
Manifesting an update...
let me manifest with you
Actualizen porfavor ;-;