This furry visual novel is very well done, everything looks great, even the music right now is the one I like the most. The bad thing is that it ends very quickly, but I hope that all of us who are here waiting for an update get it
Que puedo decir AGRADEZCO MUCHÍSIMO que tenga traducción al español ya que otras novelas que tengo pues... simplemente no traen traducción a otro idioma jaja dejando eso a un lado quiero escribir muchísimo sobre lo que me encantó de esto pero me da flojera jaja muy bien el desarrollo,tiene momentos comicos que si que sacan una sonrisa y quemas puedo decir,es perfecto lo único que no me gustó es que llegue al final antes de lo esperad :( pero bueno espero que actualicen pronto el juego y les deseó suerte a los desarrolladores de esto <3
My last read of this was in 9th grade, I'm about to graduate high school before I see the ending. Hopefully update comes out before we know who the roaring knight is
yall need to stop catastrophizing in the comments, the last dev log literally said it's gonna be a while before the next update because theyre writing the whole rest of it before updating further
No, no, I wonder if maybe they canceled this novel since there are no updates and the developers are also not posting an image or anything related to the novel.
They're still working on the other chapters and routes. They posted an image of Owen and Lucy on Twitter this year, so they're probably still working on the chapters.
Don't get me wrong but I do love myself a good stranded on an island and team work story, but the story seems a bit fast paced, lacks details on some areas and is a little cliché, meaning I'm not exactly getting attached to any of the characters in an emotional way, but it's good enough as is to get people to continue reading and wanting to know more but needs more emotional development and description for dramatic and immersion effect. The anime like humour is amazing, it's nice to see little chibi moments and references, does give me a smile at how cute it can be sometimes (I'm still waiting for that gay romance)
Characters and BG 🫂:
The character designs are very cute and I love the art style, it really adds to who these characters are (my favourite is Beru, he's a chubby teddy bear 🧸), the facial expressions are on point and little moments like by the fire together is really nice, really sets the mood very well. The BG is nicely made in addition, it's beautiful and adds to the aesthetics this story has made.
Music 🎵:
The music is calming and sits well with the aesthetics that you guys have place in and particularly for certain unserious moments as well which is a plus, would like more variety in terms of influencing emotion and nuance but well done.
Overall 🤷♀️:
It's appealling visually and aurally, well done art and BGs, music fits with majority of the scenes, writing will needmore in depth description to give finesse, nuance, emotional attachment and generally keeping the viewers attention on the story without making it seem off the initial emotion in the scene but the writing currently is enough to keep the viewers attention for wanting more info. Humour in the writing is definitely a plus, making reading this enjoyable at times.
Will be giving this VN a chance over the coming updates (31/05/25)
They have done about chapter 6 I think but they need to check everything up before releasing since they want to do all the writing first before any other announcement, but there's no more information than that (that I know)
But I believe they are still working on it since there's so much done already
Por la cantidad de tiempo que habia visto la miniatura navegando por itchy supuse que estaria mas adelantado, pero hoy me anime a probarlo y wow, lo que llevan esta muy bien trabajado, las interacciones son muy naturales y graciosas, sobre todo los mini CGI dan mas dinamismo a los personajes y situaciones representadas.
No se si pensarlo como un final pero lo que pasa con Kim es brutal, repentino y doloroso, el ambiente que se crea logra transmitir muchas emociones, me resulta bastante brutal y natural toda la narrativa y es lo que me encanta, fue algo cruel ver el cambio de escena tan repentino pero sin duda fue un gran nivel de representación y contraste en la trama.
Me encantaria poder seguir la historia pronto hay mucho que quisiera leer y descrubir aún ^^
What can I say after playing the v2.1? (I've come here from itchio recommended list, but I'm feel bad that I see this VN only now, since it's firstly released in 2020)
The artwork is amazing, the music is well chosen, the plot is interesting (sadly that only two chapters is available yet, but I'm waiting for the updates, I know how hard is to create them and I can't blame the dev team for that).
I was surprised that the game was translated into many languages, including my native language - Russian. But...
Damn, the Russian translation has a lot of mistakes and bad things.
The most notable of them are:
- the font is a little bigger than the original (the one used for the dialogues text);
- in some places the text is not displayed at all (or there is no translation at all);
- the used OpenDyslexic font is the outdated old version with broken Cyrillic alphabet. Luckily, my previous VN that I've translated — has the same font with the same issue and I already fixed it.
Since the novel is still in development and the current version for now is 2.1 — there is not that much text (still bearable for me to start from zero, haha).
So...
I can help with that if needed. I already have one translated VN on Ren'Py that I made for my own, so I know how to. (For free, no scam or something)
The translator's button (Vorobei / воробей) doesn't active and it can't give me the contact with them for feedback and bugreport.
That's why I'm writing all this here, in the comments.
Our company can translate into Traditional Chinese (HK & TW), Simplified Chinese, Japanese, Korean, Dutch, Spanish, French, Thai, Portuguese, Swedish, and Russian. If you are interested, please feel free to contact me.
Мой ТГ ниже прикреплю, можешь написать мне. По поводу перевода: да, знаю про пробелы и т.п., это штука с переносом и мой проёб. Я скоро доделаю новую версию перевода, можем с тобой обсудить это и, может, ты захочешь её проверить как сторонний читатель.
Yes it currently being worked on by their team, I don't when it'll be uploaded/updated though you can probably find more info by digging through these comments
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This furry visual novel is very well done, everything looks great, even the music right now is the one I like the most. The bad thing is that it ends very quickly, but I hope that all of us who are here waiting for an update get it
Que puedo decir AGRADEZCO MUCHÍSIMO que tenga traducción al español ya que otras novelas que tengo pues... simplemente no traen traducción a otro idioma jaja dejando eso a un lado quiero escribir muchísimo sobre lo que me encantó de esto pero me da flojera jaja muy bien el desarrollo,tiene momentos comicos que si que sacan una sonrisa y quemas puedo decir,es perfecto lo único que no me gustó es que llegue al final antes de lo esperad :( pero bueno espero que actualicen pronto el juego y les deseó suerte a los desarrolladores de esto <3
My last read of this was in 9th grade, I'm about to graduate high school before I see the ending. Hopefully update comes out before we know who the roaring knight is
update? ..... ;-;
This vn is very good for me, so I hope I can see the ending of this work before I die(′Д`)
The facial expressions are so fun! Especially Lucy and Beru's
Вот за то что есть Русский язык это лайк однозначно, а то я уже устал вручную переводить текст в novel
yall theres other games for yall to play ...stop rushing the creator
This game is amazing, I'm waiting for the next update
lets hope next update comes before GTA6
I liked it, can't wait to read more :)
yall need to stop catastrophizing in the comments, the last dev log literally said it's gonna be a while before the next update because theyre writing the whole rest of it before updating further
the novel was canceled?
Wait, really?
No, no, I wonder if maybe they canceled this novel since there are no updates and the developers are also not posting an image or anything related to the novel.
You go on. Do you think the update will come out or the game will be canceled?
From what I see, they're still working on the novel, as they sent a message and a pixel-style sprite image of Beru and Owen, which reads as follows:
This part is taking a while, but it will be finished soon.
RPG VERSION OF BERU (No sprites. The RPG has its own sprites.)
THERE IS A NORMAL BACKGROUND AND AN RPG VERSION.
THE ENTIRE SCENE WILL BE MADE UP OF 3 BACKGROUNDS WITH THE SAME, AND A PIXELATED RPG OF THE SAME BACKGROUND.
So there's still hope for a new update to the novel ^^
Thanks my friend. you wanna talk in discord?
I'm really getting worried since there's no sign of the developers on Twitter or Discord.
Even here on this page there is no response from them.
To be honest, I'm already losing hope that an update will update.
World War 3 might as well happen before this game updates
its been two years is this still being produced?
They're still working on the other chapters and routes. They posted an image of Owen and Lucy on Twitter this year, so they're probably still working on the chapters.
i heard they plan on releasing the chapters in bulk
last time i checked ch3-4 is already finished while the rest of the chapters are still being worked on
Overall, it's okay, not the best nor the worst
My thoughts on the writing 🧠 ✏️:
Don't get me wrong but I do love myself a good stranded on an island and team work story, but the story seems a bit fast paced, lacks details on some areas and is a little cliché, meaning I'm not exactly getting attached to any of the characters in an emotional way, but it's good enough as is to get people to continue reading and wanting to know more but needs more emotional development and description for dramatic and immersion effect. The anime like humour is amazing, it's nice to see little chibi moments and references, does give me a smile at how cute it can be sometimes (I'm still waiting for that gay romance)
Characters and BG 🫂:
The character designs are very cute and I love the art style, it really adds to who these characters are (my favourite is Beru, he's a chubby teddy bear 🧸), the facial expressions are on point and little moments like by the fire together is really nice, really sets the mood very well. The BG is nicely made in addition, it's beautiful and adds to the aesthetics this story has made.
Music 🎵:
The music is calming and sits well with the aesthetics that you guys have place in and particularly for certain unserious moments as well which is a plus, would like more variety in terms of influencing emotion and nuance but well done.
Overall 🤷♀️:
It's appealling visually and aurally, well done art and BGs, music fits with majority of the scenes, writing will need more in depth description to give finesse, nuance, emotional attachment and generally keeping the viewers attention on the story without making it seem off the initial emotion in the scene but the writing currently is enough to keep the viewers attention for wanting more info. Humour in the writing is definitely a plus, making reading this enjoyable at times.
Will be giving this VN a chance over the coming updates (31/05/25)
A very nice and in deoth analysis I can agree with
Manifesting an update...
let me manifest with you
Actualizen porfavor ;-;
Was shocked to realize Flunky was part of the team. I was like; WOW! FLUNKY PART OF THIS!? WOAH! WOAAAAAHHH!!!
Yeah... I was like that :|
love this novel guys. keep up the great work! awesome storytelling and character development. good stuff. looking forward to the next update.
Waiting for a owen or lucy route
Stranded tomorrow !1!1!
WHAT, is there gonna be a update??
They said they were working on the chapters, but there are no updates or recent news yet.
im about to crash plane if theres no updates
Is this vn alive...?
I hope so, please, since there are no signs of activity or any updates... ; __;
I always check Twitter, Discord and here to see if there is any sign of the creator and the people working on it, but there is no sign.
They have done about chapter 6 I think but they need to check everything up before releasing since they want to do all the writing first before any other announcement, but there's no more information than that (that I know)
But I believe they are still working on it since there's so much done already
I really like this novel a lot and it is becoming one of my favorite novels.
Okay, the start is a bit cheesy, and the game plot develops a bit too fast.
BUT
Overall, it's outstanding work. I especially love the complexity of the GUI and the amount of high-quality artwork that was made for the game
The story is dynamic and works.
It's a pretty solid dramedy with elements of romantic
Por la cantidad de tiempo que habia visto la miniatura navegando por itchy supuse que estaria mas adelantado, pero hoy me anime a probarlo y wow, lo que llevan esta muy bien trabajado, las interacciones son muy naturales y graciosas, sobre todo los mini CGI dan mas dinamismo a los personajes y situaciones representadas.
No se si pensarlo como un final pero lo que pasa con Kim es brutal, repentino y doloroso, el ambiente que se crea logra transmitir muchas emociones, me resulta bastante
brutal y natural toda la narrativa y es lo que me encanta, fue algo cruel ver el cambio de escena tan repentino pero sin duda fue un gran nivel de representación y contraste en la trama.
Me encantaria poder seguir la historia pronto hay mucho que quisiera leer y descrubir aún ^^
i have a question are they all gonna surviv?
As I heard, there will be more than one ending.
we can only know when the sun dies out
What can I say after playing the v2.1? (I've come here from itchio recommended list, but I'm feel bad that I see this VN only now, since it's firstly released in 2020)
The artwork is amazing, the music is well chosen, the plot is interesting (sadly that only two chapters is available yet, but I'm waiting for the updates, I know how hard is to create them and I can't blame the dev team for that).
I was surprised that the game was translated into many languages, including my native language - Russian. But...
Damn, the Russian translation has a lot of mistakes and bad things.
The most notable of them are:
- the font is a little bigger than the original (the one used for the dialogues text);
- in some places the text is not displayed at all (or there is no translation at all);
- the used OpenDyslexic font is the outdated old version with broken Cyrillic alphabet. Luckily, my previous VN that I've translated — has the same font with the same issue and I already fixed it.
Since the novel is still in development and the current version for now is 2.1 — there is not that much text (still bearable for me to start from zero, haha).
So...
I can help with that if needed. I already have one translated VN on Ren'Py that I made for my own, so I know how to. (For free, no scam or something)
The translator's button (Vorobei / воробей) doesn't active and it can't give me the contact with them for feedback and bugreport.
That's why I'm writing all this here, in the comments.
I apologize for that.
Don't worry! Feel free to reach us out on discord for more discussion about translation
Hi:)
Our company can translate into Traditional Chinese (HK & TW), Simplified Chinese, Japanese, Korean, Dutch, Spanish, French, Thai, Portuguese, Swedish, and Russian. If you are interested, please feel free to contact me.
Here is my email: sales@wemaven.com
Do you have a link to your Discord? I can't find your group.Please give me a link.
Мой ТГ ниже прикреплю, можешь написать мне.
По поводу перевода: да, знаю про пробелы и т.п., это штука с переносом и мой проёб.
Я скоро доделаю новую версию перевода, можем с тобой обсудить это и, может, ты захочешь её проверить как сторонний читатель.
https://t.me/Vorobei117
Is this game going to be updated? I haven't seen any update news for a long time.
Yes it currently being worked on by their team, I don't when it'll be uploaded/updated though you can probably find more info by digging through these comments
Beru's route is very close to completion. They posted it on Discord and X. ;)